The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

As we see in the bar chart, we have three types of People Who ate fruits and vegetables in the Past

Years

.  In 2001, they started at a low level, and as the

years

  passed, it increased.  As for men, in the first three

years

their eating average is almost level out, and in the following

years

, it gradually climbs except for the

last

year it

drop

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.  With regard to women, it

going

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up in the first six

years

, and in the

last

two

years

, it

reduce

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.

Finally

, children began their early

years

at a steady Yate and it increased from 2004 to 2007 but in the

last

Your it decreased Slightly.  In the

end

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we conclude that women at the most

in

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eat all

years

, followed

men

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by men

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and

then

children, women are

also

more careful than men and children in eating fruits and vegetables, as well the rate Soat for everyone in all

years

.