The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The bar chart gives information about the difference number of universities’ international students who graduated from each Canadian department in 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, it can be seen that in 2006, almost all provinces had a higher percentage of foreign students graduating than in 2001. In 2001, the gap between each province was narrow. The
proportion
of other nations that graduated in New Brunswick was the first rank with around 7 per
cent
followed by Nova Scotia and Quebec at around 6.5 and just over 6 per
cent
respectively.
While
all other areas in
this
bar chart had less
proportion
with 3 to 6 per
cent
. In 2006, the
proportion
of international students in almost every zone increased. New Brunswick still had the highest percentage at 11.5.
While
Nova Scotia and British Columbia equal 10.5 per
cent
which was ranked second and other regions except Alberta
also
had more
proportion
with 6 - 8.5%.
On the other hand
, it was only in Alberta that the
proportion
of foreign collegians decreased from 5.5 to 4.5.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage change
  • share of international students
  • university graduates
  • Canadian provinces
  • increase
  • decrease
  • overall trend
  • notable similarities
  • economic conditions
  • immigration policies
  • numerical values
  • reputation of universities
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