The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
The table compares the average amount of
time
per day that men
and women
in the UK spend doing different activities. It is clear that
people in the UK spend more time
sleeping than doing any other daily activity. Also
, there are significant differences between the time
spent by men
and women
on employment/study and housework.
On average, men
and women
in the UK sleep for about 8 hours per day. Leisure takes up the second largest proportion of their time
. Men
spend 5 hours and 25 minutes
doing various leisure activities, such
as watching TV or doing sport
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sports
while
women
have 4 hours and 53 minutes
of leisure time
.
It is noticeable that men
work or study for an average of 79 minutes
more than women
every day. By contrast
, women
spend 79 minutes
more than men
doing housework, and they spend over twice as much time
looking after children.Submitted by periset on
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