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Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine. What do you think is best for both the tourists and local community?

#people #holidays #resorts #interest #country #travel #customs #traditions #cuisine #tourists #community
In our virtual world nowadays, various
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serving
field
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 created to customer's demands responding and
travel
 majority is not exceptional.
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 some
thought
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 that
spend
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 their
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 in resorts is the best, the
opposing
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 keen on
travel
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 around
destination
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the destination
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 and
explore
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 area
cultural
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. I proudly advocate the second notion and will explain it in
two fold
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 below.
Firstly
, wandering around
country
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 can help enhance
visitors
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 comprehension
with
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 new knowledge. If they have the chance to discover the area, it is
obviously
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 that specific
cultural
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 and
traditional
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 will
known
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 as well,it good for both tourists when they could have revealed and received deep insight
of
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 inhabitants
life-style
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lifestyles
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, customs,... But
also
 local community with opportunities
of
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open-mind
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in
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interfered polish.
Moreover
, the
travel
 point
stand
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 a good chance of profit-making. By exploring around, the more expenditure of customers, the more
incomes
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 of local retails.
For instance
, USA wages statistics in 2018 roughly 30% of
economy
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the economy
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 usage chart in tourism, which is
an
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impressive and delightful for
powerful
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 country like
USA
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.
Furthermore
, huge companies could gain
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sharply
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 increase in earnings by being the main production and supply for grocery chain stores. In conclusion,
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 around the country could help tourists gain more knowledge about resident traditions, customs and
also
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cuisine.
Besides
 that, the area
also
receive
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 lots of opportunities
of
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 money making.
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