Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine. What do you think is best for both the tourists and local community?

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created to customer's demands responding and

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around

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. I proudly advocate the second notion and will explain it in

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below.

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can help enhance

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comprehension

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new knowledge. If they have the chance to discover the area, it is

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that specific

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and

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as well,it good for both tourists when they could have revealed and received deep insight

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inhabitants

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, customs,... But

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interfered polish.

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a good chance of profit-making. By exploring around, the more expenditure of customers, the more

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of local retails.

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usage chart in tourism, which is

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impressive and delightful for

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country like

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increase in earnings by being the main production and supply for grocery chain stores. In conclusion,

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around the country could help tourists gain more knowledge about resident traditions, customs and

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cuisine.

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lots of opportunities

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money making.