The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
The diagram demonstrates how many British people consumed a portion of 5 vegetables and fruits each day between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
, it is clear that
while
women
had the most consumption of greeneries each year, the count was the least for youngsters.
Focusing on the first three years, the amount of vegetables and fruit children and men had showed no difference with a portion of almost 12.5 and 27.5, respectively. On the other hand
, the same figure for women
rose dramatically from 22.5% to about 27% of usage on a daily basis.
Moving on to 2004 to 2008, all three of the subjects initially
saw an increase with a following decline by the last
year. With Children and men's vegetable use being lower than that of women
's throughout the years, the former rose from around 17% to 24% and the latter saw an increase of about 6%. In terms of women
, their slight change was roundly
2%.Rephrase
around
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