Few people think that it is important for collecting personal information such interest, hobbies and material status. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, people record their own information including daily lifestyle,

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activities, personal status,

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, and many more through social media. Some individuals believe that it is essential to do,

whereas

others think it

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. In

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essay, both

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will be discussed before my perspective is reached. Accumulating personal data can provide numerous benefits to doers. First of all, it plays a key role in a reminder, which

record

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your

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hobbies, interest, and emotion in

the

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particular period.

Therefore

, we can learn to be

better

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person from it.

For example

, I always take

pictures

of myself and weigh my body once a month to see how my body

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. Over the period of 8 years, I can realize the change

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my body and which part of muscle I should develop more.

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, daily

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and

pictures

can remind you

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happy time

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to positive energy for living. To illustrate, I

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see my picture traveling

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with my family and friends to charge a battery for myself.

However

, some people think that there

is

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some drawbacks

for

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keeping

everythings

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everything

.

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pictures

and

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can remind you

good

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memories,

it

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can

also

remind you

a

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unpleasant memories

too

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such

as the

pictures

of pass away person, or the gifts of ex-girlfriends.

In addition

, it takes time and space to keep all of

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the informations

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informations

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information

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. To keep a thousand

of

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images, you need to buy 1 TB

harddisk

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which is worth more than 2000 Baht.

Hence

, it is better to collect only necessary things

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everythings

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everything

. In conclusion, there are

a

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enormous advantages of collecting personal data consisting of being a reminder of the time, and

able

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to bring back good memories

in

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despite of few drawbacks. In my opinion, it is better to collect and record our information as its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.