The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The bar chart illustrates the amount of

lesiu

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leisure

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Oct 17, 2023

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

Many cities have vehicle-free day, which encourages citizens to take bus, cycle or take taxi to go out. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people around the world spend the majority of their free time at home watching TV shows. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that this is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both view points and give your opinion.