The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The bar chart illustrates the amount of

lesiu

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leisure

lesion

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Oct 17, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

You have begun a new course at University and the professor gave you the first assignment of the course . You are not sure how to write the assignment. Write an email to your professor . In your letter: -state your purpose; -explain the problem; -ask for an appointment to discuss it

Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.