You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter : Give details of your visit to the restaurant. Explain the reason for your celebration. Say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir,
I am writing a letter to appreciate your excellent service.
Since I decided to celebrate my
parents
25th anniversary Change noun form
parent's
parents'
then
my friend suggested Rephrase
apply
to book
your reservation in the Wasabi Hotel. Change the verb form
booking
Initially
, I was bewildered to book or not so my colleague told me that he had made birthday arrangements in this
hotel so I did.
The ambiance
of the indoor area was good because there were more spacious inside for customers. The interior Change the spelling
ambience
designing
of the inside was Replace the word
design
unique
style which we really liked. Add an article
a unique
the unique
Besides
this
, the seats were comfortable and beautiful colour schemes. The table was well decorated with different balloons and flowers so my family had
happy. The most exciting thing was Verb problem
was
various
types of Correct article usage
the various
cusines
Correct your spelling
cuisine
cuisines
their
. The main course of items Correct your spelling
there
are
reasonable that anyone can easily pay. Change the verb form
is
Therefore
, quality
of the food was quite well prepared and Correct article usage
the quality
presentation
was marvellous. We Correct article usage
the presentation
also
liked the special three layer
cake with Add a hyphen
three-layer
designed
a couple on the top of it. Verb problem
apply
Last
but not least, the serving system was professional and staff
was well trained. Add an article
the staff
Overall
we loved your cafe and I will also
recommend to my relatives to must taste of food.
Yours Faithfully,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite