You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter : Give details of your visit to the restaurant. Explain the reason for your celebration. Say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to appreciate your excellent service. Since I decided to celebrate my
parents
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25th anniversary
then
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my friend suggested
to book
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your reservation in the Wasabi Hotel.
Initially
, I was bewildered to book or not so my colleague told me that he had made birthday arrangements in
this
hotel so I did. The
ambiance
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of the indoor area was good because there were more spacious inside for customers. The interior
designing
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of the inside was
unique
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a unique
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style which we really liked.
Besides
this
, the seats were comfortable and beautiful colour schemes. The table was well decorated with different balloons and flowers so my family
had
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happy. The most exciting thing was
various
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types of
cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
their
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. The main course of items
are
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reasonable that anyone can easily pay.
Therefore
,
quality
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the quality
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of the food was quite well prepared and
presentation
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the presentation
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was marvellous. We
also
liked the special
three layer
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cake with
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a couple on the top of it.
Last
but not least, the serving system was professional and
staff
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was well trained.
Overall
we loved your cafe and I will
also
recommend to my relatives to must taste of food. Yours Faithfully,
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  • secondly
  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
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  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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