You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter : Give details of your visit to the restaurant. Explain the reason for your celebration. Say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Sir/Madam, A few days ago I visited your restaurant in Birmingham, with my friends to celebrate my birthday. At
first,
we were a bit disappointed with the environment, but after the staff gave us the menu we all had second thoughts. We had a menu with four courses. The appetisers were extremely tasty. We had a salad with peers and honey sauce. For telling the truth we found it little for a starter. After the soup came
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all those vegetables and fish and it was
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very creamy and delicious. We needed some more. The main course was a big plater with a variety of small fish and all had their own crispy flavour. For
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we order a lava cake with ice cream. The staff came and brought everyone's dessert except mine. After a second I saw a big lava cake with candles and fire sticks on it and everybody started singing me the Happy Birthday song. I was embarrassed at the beginning but after I found it very carry move from your employees. They all seem happy and do not bother doing that thing. I was good wise surprised and I assure you that we will come back for many more celebrations and gatherings.
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again congratulations on the good food and services. Yours faithfully, Mark Duine
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the greeting and closing are more formal and fitting for a letter to a restaurant manager.
coherence cohesion
The letter adequately responds to the task and the writing tone is mostly suitable, but the single idea per paragraph could be improved for better coherence.
task achievement
The response is complete and relevant to the task, but the writing tone could be more formal and professional for a letter to a restaurant manager.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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