You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors – agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services – to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the economic influence of Agriculture, Manufacturing and Business and Financial in Great Britain from 1900 to 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that the importance of the third mentioned
sector steadily increased during Add a hyphen
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this
time period.
What is striking the most looking
at the data is the fact that the Rephrase
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contribution
of Business and Finance grew during the period of observation. While
this
type of economy was a minor aspect with a percentage of approximately 3 % in 1900, in 2000, it reached almost 35 % due to
a
steady growth.
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However
, the contribution
of Agriculture and Manufacturing decreased significantly. Whereas
, farming was a key component of the UK economy in 1900 and even extended its impact to its peak at 52 % in 1950, in the following the influence plummeted notably and leads
to a marginal impact of approximately 2 % in 2000. Wrong verb form
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Accordingly
, the contribution
of Manufacturing fell steadily and reached its lowest point in 2000 at 18 %.
In conclusion, while
the Business and Financial sector
profited from the economic changes during the 20th century, Manufacturing and Agriculture reduced their Fix the agreement mistake
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