The data show significant changes in the proportion of international students among university graduates from different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

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data show significant changes in the proportion of international
students
among university graduates from different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. The most notable
growth
was in New Brunswick, where the proportion of international
students
increased from 7% to 12%, indicating the province's growing attractiveness to international
students
. Nova Scotia
also
experienced
growth
, exceeding 10% by 2006. Quebec, Alberta and British Columbia saw steady
growth
in international
students
. Manitoba
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Newfoundland and Labrador,
although
showing lower percentages, still showed notable
growth
, reflecting the widespread quality of higher education in Canada. Ontario,
although
showing
growth
, is more modest, indicating a somewhat slower rate of
growth
in international student enrollment than the other provinces.
Overall
, the findings suggest a positive trend of increasing international diversity in Canadian universities.
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