The chart below shows the percentages of males and females with higher qualifications in five countries in 2001
The bar chart compares the shares of
men
and women
who had university degrees in 2001 across 5 countries. (U.S., Japan, Switzerland
, Britain
, Germany
)
Overall
, in Switzerland
, Britain
, and Japan more males
graduated from higher education schools than females
while
in the other 2 countries (Germany
, and the U.S.) the percentage of females
outnumbered that of males
. It is also
clear that,
similarities can be seen in Remove the comma
apply
Switzerland
and Germany
, with both of them having the largest percentage of qualified men
and women
respectively.
The share of men
who had higher education qualifications was the highest in Switzerland
at 45, while
that of women
in the same country was slightly less at 35. The difference between the percentages of males
and females
was 5 in both Britain
and in
Japan, with the latter being 5% less. 35% of the Change preposition
apply
males
graduated from universities in Britain
while
the percentage of Japanese men
was 30% while
only a quarter of females
which is the lowest figure in the graph went to universities.
In Germany
and in the United States, on the other hand
, more women
had higher education degrees than men
. 45% of females
who completed the survey in Germany
said that they had the qualification, which was the highest share for women
among all other countries, while
10% less
Change the quantifier
fewer
men
reported so in the same country. The disparity between males
and females
was only slight at 40 and 35 respectively.Submitted by shakhzodbekmirzaev7 on
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