The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.

The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future.
The line graph details the figures for the number of workers in three categories in the USA in millions and the predictions for the future . Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is really apparent that in spite of a brief dominance, the workforce in agriculture registers a dramatic decrease.
In contrast
, there is an enormous increase in terms of services,
also
it is predicted to have the same behavior till 2025. Regarding the trends,
initially
, farmers were in the high of importance in 1975, 8 times more than other factors with 80
million
. After the following two years the significance of agricultural workers reduced by a second of the initial total numbers.
This
process has continued the same till now and it is expected to
last
similar way.
On the contrary
, in 2025, farmers will be considered as undemanding jobs, 8 times less than their original position
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10
million
. In terms of services,
firstly
employees in
this
area were marginal in 1975 despite the fact that it experienced a minimal rise from 10
million
to 15
million
.
However
, beginning the late 1979 it rose sharply and dominated other figures coming to 1980 above 40
million
in.
Furthermore
, it is believed to remain the same for the future. Even though the manufacturing process was similar to services from 1975 to 1980, it had a rapid reduction.
In contrast
, it will be identical to agriculture in 2025.
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