The table below shows the age profile of tourists on backpacking holidays and guided tours in New Zealand in 2005, and standing next to a pie chart gives the satisfaction rating of their stay.

The table below shows the

age

profile of tourists on backpacking holidays and guided

tours

in New Zealand in 2005, and standing next to a pie chart gives the satisfaction rating of their stay. As is presented in the table, the

age

profile of people, backpacking, and guided

tours

percentages

are

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on the different types of holiday

varies

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considerably. The vast majority (62%) of people from 18-30 mostly prefer backpacking. Apart

just

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over an insignificant minority (7%) choose guided

tours

.

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, the number of people

increase

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, when the

age

profile

go

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up

till

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41-50, too. It is clear from that, proportion

make

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up 57% of those who

on

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guided

tours

, withal, backpacking plunge to exactly a half. The 31-40

age

group is almost the same (23% and 22%)

by

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the

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both types.

Overall

, a large proportion (83%) was satisfied, 10% not

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their holiday,

7

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%

not

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sure about

this

.