You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter: say which electrical goods you want ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay explain how you will collect the goo

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter with my full regards that I am your daily consumer and wish to buy a premium electronic good from your shop. I have seen the advertisement
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newelectric
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new electric
cooker and pan in the newspaper. I am highly impressed with the automatic
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temperature
control facilities. I am eagerly waiting for
such
items and I want to buy them.
Moreover
, I have no idea of the cost of the products. I found it actually needful, and ready to pay the genuine price for
such
useful household things.
Therefore
, kindly let me know the price of these commodities. I recently shifted to the new home which is actually far away from your shop as compared to my previous location.
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, it would be a great help if you could send products to my office address which is
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between my home and your shop. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you. You are truly Aashima
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