The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows data about the
intake
of fat through Use synonyms
milk
and Use synonyms
butter
by people aged less than 25 to 65 and over.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the younger groups (25 to 45) consume less Linking Words
butter
and Use synonyms
milk
in comparison to the older Use synonyms
group
irrespective of the fat percentage.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, the highest consumption of Linking Words
milk
is 1900ml by the elderly, Use synonyms
while
the lowest is 1200ml by the under twenty-five Linking Words
group
. Use synonyms
However
, the latter consumes the most full-fat Linking Words
milk
at 59% Use synonyms
than
the rest, Change preposition
of
whereas
the former consumes the least. Linking Words
Lastly
, the middle-aged Linking Words
group
consume the highest Use synonyms
intake
of low-fat Use synonyms
milk
at 80% Use synonyms
while
the youngest Linking Words
group
's figure is the smallest at 41%.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, the 45-65 Linking Words
group
intakes the most Use synonyms
butter
at 60g, meanwhile, the least is consumed by the youngest Use synonyms
group
at 12g. In terms of the fat, the latter consumes the most of full fat at 60% and the lowest Use synonyms
intake
of 38% belongs to the 26-45 Use synonyms
group
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
group
has the highest Use synonyms
intake
of low-fat Use synonyms
butter
at 62% than the rest.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words intake, milk, butter, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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