The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows data about the
intake
of fat through
milk
and
butter
by people aged less than 25 to 65 and over.
Overall
, the younger groups (25 to 45) consume less
butter
and
milk
in comparison to the older
group
irrespective of the fat percentage.
Firstly
, the highest consumption of
milk
is 1900ml by the elderly,
while
the lowest is 1200ml by the under twenty-five
group
.
However
, the latter consumes the most full-fat
milk
at 59%
than
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the rest,
whereas
the former consumes the least.
Lastly
, the middle-aged
group
consume the highest
intake
of low-fat
milk
at 80%
while
the youngest
group
's figure is the smallest at 41%.
Secondly
, the 45-65
group
intakes the most
butter
at 60g, meanwhile, the least is consumed by the youngest
group
at 12g. In terms of the fat, the latter consumes the most of full fat at 60% and the lowest
intake
of 38% belongs to the 26-45
group
.
Conversely
,
this
group
has the highest
intake
of low-fat
butter
at 62% than the rest.
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