The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows data about the
intake
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of fat through
milk
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and
butter
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by people aged less than 25 to 65 and over.
Overall
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, the younger groups (25 to 45) consume less
butter
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and
milk
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in comparison to the older
group
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irrespective of the fat percentage.
Firstly
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, the highest consumption of
milk
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is 1900ml by the elderly,
while
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the lowest is 1200ml by the under twenty-five
group
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.
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, the latter consumes the most full-fat
milk
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at 59%
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the rest,
whereas
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the former consumes the least.
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, the middle-aged
group
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consume the highest
intake
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of low-fat
milk
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at 80%
while
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the youngest
group
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's figure is the smallest at 41%.
Secondly
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, the 45-65
group
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intakes the most
butter
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at 60g, meanwhile, the least is consumed by the youngest
group
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at 12g. In terms of the fat, the latter consumes the most of full fat at 60% and the lowest
intake
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of 38% belongs to the 26-45
group
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.
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,
this
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group
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has the highest
intake
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of low-fat
butter
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at 62% than the rest.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words intake, milk, butter, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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