The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows data about the
intake
of fat through milk
and butter
by people aged less than 25 to 65 and over.
Overall
, the younger groups (25 to 45) consume less butter
and milk
in comparison to the older group
irrespective of the fat percentage.
Firstly
, the highest consumption of milk
is 1900ml by the elderly, while
the lowest is 1200ml by the under twenty-five group
. However
, the latter consumes the most full-fat milk
at 59% than
the rest, Change preposition
of
whereas
the former consumes the least. Lastly
, the middle-aged group
consume the highest intake
of low-fat milk
at 80% while
the youngest group
's figure is the smallest at 41%.
Secondly
, the 45-65 group
intakes the most butter
at 60g, meanwhile, the least is consumed by the youngest group
at 12g. In terms of the fat, the latter consumes the most of full fat at 60% and the lowest intake
of 38% belongs to the 26-45 group
. Conversely
, this
group
has the highest intake
of low-fat butter
at 62% than the rest.Submitted by Mazam on
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