You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter: say which electrical goods you want ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay explain how you will collect the goods

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about an electronic smart device that helps in cleaning the floor. Because I live in South Alley, it would not be feasible for me to visit your shop which is at the other end of the city. First of all, I am looking for an automated floor cleaner for my 1500 square feet apartment.

In particular

, the machine of the brand 'Arobot', I have seen its advertisement on YouTube.

However

, I would like to have the device in a bright yellow colour.

Furthermore

, I would like to know about its pricing details and cost-free EMI options if available.

Apart from

this

, it would be appreciated if you could explain about method of payment, I can pay through a cheque, card or bank transfer. If we finalise our deal, I will collect the item on the weekend from the shop. Still, I would like to receive the purchase receipt before the weekend. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ravindra Rajole

Submitted by ravirajole on Wed Oct 25 2023

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8 paragraphs

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8.50

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a town which is far from your home.Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter: say which electrical goods you want ask questions about the cost of the goods and how to pay explain how you will collect the goods

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In your view, what is the most important thing for governments to spend money on: education, health, transportation, or something else? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.