Topic: The bar chart shows the percentage of people in the United Kingdom per age group without any qualifications.

Topic: The bar chart shows the percentage of people in the United Kingdom per age group without any qualifications.
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The report devices from a bar chart that illustrates the rate of
citizens
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academic level per age group in the United Kingdom.
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, there was a significant difference between ages, it prefers to the oldest one held the most than any others. Not only is
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point clear, but more
women
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than
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did not
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any qualifications. Notably, the ratio of females in both groups of 17–19 and 20–24 years old was slightly higher than that of males, with a 2-3% difference between the sexes.
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, observe
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rate among the higher and more advanced age brackets, with 25-29 and 30-39 years old being the same, with approximately 7.5% for both
men
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and
women
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. In the remaining groups,
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far outperformed
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in
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survey by around 5% in each group.
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point, the
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in the 50-59/64-year-old group hold the first rank with 20%, which is much higher than over 15% of the
men
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. On a final note of comparison, the oldest's rate was nearly four times as much as the youngest in the survey.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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