The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2030 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2030 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate forecasts for
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worldwide production across various sectors for the years 2030 and 2050.
Overall
, there is limited variation in the expected distribution of production across sectors during these two years, with manufacturing and services maintaining their dominant positions. The projected
proportion
for services production will be 51.2% in 2050, a
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increase from 50.2% to 1 %, with info-Com Tech expected to small adjustable from 5.6% to 5.9%,
while
it's predicted that the manufacturing projection will account for a smaller
proportion
with rise from 30.6% in 2030 to 33.1% in 2050, it's estimated that there will be a minimal increase in the
proportion
of materials with grow up from 2.9% to 3.5%.
By contrast
, the drop in the
proportion
of energy
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to
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slight
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decline
from 6.7% to 4.3% in 2050, with agriculture estimated to decrease more than
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twofold
from 4% in 2030 to 2 % in 2050.
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