the charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. the same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information and compare where relevant.
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The following pie charts compare how one
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hundred
people
who visited the Hotel
Parkway voted about their satisfuction
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between the years 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the majority of the visitors remained mostly content with the customer service during 2010, with the highest proportion of them being excellent, whereas
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whereas
only 14% of individuals voted in 2005. As for persons who found the hotel
good in customer servise
had doubled from 14% to 28%.
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guests
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people
who experienced a very low service dipped shaply
to almost 4 times, as during 2005 the proportion had been 15% and during 2010 was 4%Correct your spelling
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