the charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. the same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information and compare where relevant.

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The following pie charts compare how one

hadred

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hundred

people

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who visited the

Hotel

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Parkway voted about their

satisfuction

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satisfaction

that was provided by the

hotel

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between the years 2005 and 2010.

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it is clear that

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the majority of the visitors remained mostly content with the customer service during 2010, with the highest proportion of them being excellent,

whereas

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during 2005 almost half of the population who were asked,

steyed

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seemed

satisfacted

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satisfaction

. Twice as many

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apply

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people

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voted for an

exquisious

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exquisite

guest's satisfaction at about 40%

during

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2010,

whereas

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only 14% of individuals voted in 2005. As for persons who found the

hotel

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good in customer

servise

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service

had doubled from 14% to 28%. The proportion of

people

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however

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who believed that the

hotel

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services were

exqicit

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exquisite

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apply

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had dropped significantly to more than half of the percentages of

the

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apply

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2005 (from 45%

2005

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in 2005

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to 17%

during

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2010.

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SImilarly

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Similar

this

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drop,

poor

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the poor

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guests

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guest

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service rate had a substantial fall to 12%.

While

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people

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who experienced a very low service dipped

shaply

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sharply

to almost 4 times, as during 2005 the proportion had been 15% and during 2010 was 4%

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, hotel with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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