One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job, and your manager has asked you to arrange a farewell party for him/her. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, •suggest a suitable date and time for the party •recommend a place • discuss the food and entertainment options that should be available

Dear sir, I am
writting
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writing
you
this
letter to inform you about the details in regards to the
farwell
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farewell
Farwell
party for our
team mate
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Qusai which you requested
from
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me to organize. Qusai is leaving our company
at
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on
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the
3th
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oF
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of
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july. I am planning a
piqniq
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picnic
party
this
weekend if you
dont
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don't
mind. I thought that it would be a great
apportunity
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opportunity
to celebrate
as well as
getting
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to know each other more as a team. we will
strart
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start
to gather around 12:00 pm in the company parking lot, after
that
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i
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arranged for us a
mini bus
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minibus
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to take us to the lake where the party will take place. Upon our arrival to the lake, there will be waiting for us the catering company for food and drinks
as well as
deserts
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. Me and other team members
also
arrange a bunch of
a
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fun activities to do. I believe it will be a memorable get-together and if you want to change or add anything or give me suggestions, please feel free to reply at your earliest convenience. I look forward to
hear
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from you as soon as possible. Yours
sincerly
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sincerely
, YM
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task response
Ensure that all the required information is included in the letter, such as the suggested date and time for the party, the recommended place, and the food and entertainment options.
coherence and cohesion
Improve coherence and cohesion by organizing the ideas in a more logical and structured manner. Use appropriate transition words and phrases to connect the different sections of the letter.
lexical resource
Expand your lexical resource by using a wider range of vocabulary to convey your ideas more effectively. This will also help to make your letter more interesting and engaging.
grammatical range
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy, including verb tense agreement, word order, and punctuation. Proofread your letter carefully to eliminate any errors.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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