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Women and man are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, some people believe that it is right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In
this
 modern era,
men
 and
women
 of both genders are working together. Having different strengths and weaknesses as
men
 and
women
, it is appropriate to distinguish between these gender roles considering certain professions. Working in
work
 sectors like construction, military etc. demands more physical strength and skillsets than cerebral brilliancy. It is ostensible that
men
 are physically stronger than
women
.
Hence
, it is fit to exclude males from
females
 for construction and military
work
.
This
 type of
work
 demands physical skill sets.
Consequently
,
such
 types of
work
 could affect
females
' bodies severely. To maintain balance and a healthy
work
 culture , it is a proper step to choose between these two gender roles. Professions like Nurse, medicine, science etc. demand cerebral intelligence.
Hence
,
Females
 could be appointed for
such
 job roles in our society.
Such
 Works hold great importance to society as well. These types of
work
 won't affect
females
' health conditions as it doesn't demand physical strength.
Furthermore
, being a housewife is
also
 an under-appreciated
work
. Maintaining a house properly demands great management skills and
females
 are born with
such
 abilities.
Therefore
, certain types of
work
 demand certain abilities to be accounted for by these two gender individuals. It is wise
to conclude
 that
men
 and
women
 possess different strengths and weaknesses.
Hence
, Human beings should consider
such
 abilities for choosing their
work
 field. In future, it will greatly benefit these individuals as well.
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