Teenagers nowadays spend too much time on playing video games. Describe the effects on teenagers, families and society. Report the measures to solve the problem.
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, teenagers have spent countless of Fix the agreement mistake
times
time
on video games.
The effects are horrendous as many families report that their children do not consent to spend Use synonyms
time
with Use synonyms
familly
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family
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causes and give solutions in order to combat the incident.
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is because of the addiction to games that they undergo at the moment. Linking Words
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the teenager
time
of the human age where constant entertainment and amusement have to be found every day and gaming is their only answer. Use synonyms
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opportunities
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them
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they
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and they
further
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started as a humble shooting game, but now its content Correct your spelling
Fortnite
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said to captivate addiction from those teenagers.
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Nevertheless
, it is not a hopeless situation for those parents though. In fact, with dedication and tough love, victory shall be theirs. Families should limit the Linking Words
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such
as grounding, and taking away their gaming devices,... Linking Words
Moreover
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do. As long as meeting face to face, relationship with gaming will be declined.
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as well as
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with them personally.Use synonyms
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