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Write a letter You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

#reservations #dinner #restaurant #town #service #manager #resolution #email
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Dear Manager, I am writing
this
 letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding my recent dining experience at your outlet. First of all, I visited the
restaurant
 namely "Taj Banjar" on 30th October, unexpectedly there was no reserved table, even though I booked an online reservation. I waited almost 30 minutes before getting to the dining table.
Secondly
, the waiter was not paying attention to my order. He was busy watching a cricket match. I ordered Chicken Biryani and Mutton soup ,but the food tasted horrible , it was too salty . I was extremely disappointed with the food and service.
Moreover
, the
restaurant
 is not hygienic in terms of cleanliness, and bad odour comes out of open the kitchen. I plan to provide negative feedback regarding your
restaurant
 as the service and taste of the food is very bad. I will not recommend the hotel to my friends and relatives. I suggest providing proper training to your waitstaff and letting them know how to behave with customers and maintain the hygiene of the
restaurant
 surroundings. I appreciate your immediate attention to
this
 matter. Yours faithfully, Dillirao.
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Task Response
Clearly and accurately address the main task of expressing dissatisfaction about the recent dining experience.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use transition words and phrases to ensure smooth and logical flow between sentences and paragraphs.
Lexical Resource
Expand your range of vocabulary by using more varied and sophisticated words and expressions.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Pay attention to sentence structure, verb tense, and use of modifiers to ensure grammatical accuracy.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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