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Writing Samples
Band 7

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, Thank you for planning and hosting my 25th birthday party at your restaurant, it was
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 an amazing experience at your resort. I and my friends thoroughly enjoyed it. We all loved your delicious Thai food and your staff's unexceptional service. Honesty, your staff knows what they are doing and
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, they entertained us a lot.
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, my group said your hotel has some of the best chefs.
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, the atmosphere at your resort has its own vibe as we liked it. People were dancing and singing. There were some sports activities
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 being held which we played. In short, we felt comfortable so much that we extended our stay for 2 more days. Even though we had an excellent stay at yours, I have to say your hotel should have paid attention to your water pipelines. the whole vacation, the water kept dripping from the faucets and we called the staff. Unfortunately, they did not come to fix it as there were no plumbers available on the site. Other than that, You have got an outstanding service and food. Thank you for having us. Yours Faithfully, Grishma Patel

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task response
Make sure to address all the points mentioned in the prompt clearly and in detail.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas and paragraphs in a logical sequence to improve coherence and cohesion.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and use a variety of sentence types.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Grateful, appreciation, memorable celebration
  • Delectable, sumptuous, culinary delights
  • Attentive, courteous, top-notch service
  • Vibrant, cozy, inviting ambiance
  • Constructive feedback, recommendations
  • Enhance, optimize, refine
  • Loyalty, patronage, looking forward
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