You have a problem with a recently hired employee in your workplace. Write a letter to the HR manager. In your letter describe the problem the new employee has caused Explain how other colleagues feel about the new employee's conduct Say how you expect the manager to address the situation.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction
about
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the new employee we recently hired,
and
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who
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now is part of my team. The issue about
this
person is that he does not respect the working
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journey
.
For instance
, he always arrives late at his working station
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and
also
leaves the office earlier, sometimes 30 minutes before everyone.
Furthermore
, he is always late when we have a meeting with important customers.
Additionally
,
this
posture is
also
causing
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with the rest of the team. I have been receiving numerous
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about
this
situation. The
others
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employees
belive
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that is
not fair, because
this
new colleague is impacting the
reults
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results
of our area. I expect that you could apply a
disciplinar
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disciplinary
mesure
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measure
on him, and support me with
this
situation, since I have already talked to him, but I could not see any improvement. Maybe with your help we would be able
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solve
this
problem. I am looking
forwand
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forward
to hearing from you soon.
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Your
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faithfully, Lucas Campos
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task response
Make sure to include all the required information mentioned in the task prompt, such as describing the problem caused by the new employee and explaining how colleagues feel.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas in a logical manner, using clear topic sentences and supporting details.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more varied and precise words and phrases to express your ideas.
grammatical range
Review your grammar to ensure accurate and varied sentence structures.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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