The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams
illustrates
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the issue of the land affected by flooding in a UK town and two probable solutions to tackle
this
.
Overall
, since some areas have
affected
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by flooding, the first
solution
is to relocate the
fascilities
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facilities
which has the drawback of cost.
On the other hand
, the second
solution
is constructing dams to prevent flooding which is considerably affordable compared to the former one. The former
solution
suggests the relocation of the industrial park, housing area, and commercial district far away from the estimated flooding area. By
this
method,
residential
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area and the park will be relocated to the north of the River Awl;
however
,
commercial
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the commercial
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district will be placed to the south of the River Awl. The primary benefit of
this
suggestion is the maintainment of the river environment.
Nevertheless
, it costs a huge amount. The latter
solution
to
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dams to prevent flooding from the rivers. The connection between the rivers will be turned into channels and their surplus will be kept in reservoirs.
Although
it is relatively cheaper than the first suggestion, the disruption of land to create reservoirs is the main drawback to
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the flooding issue.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words solution with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flood barriers
  • levees
  • drainage systems
  • water runoff
  • low-lying areas
  • urban areas
  • vulnerable areas
  • spill over
  • geographical layout
  • enhancement
  • infrastructure
  • effectiveness
  • drawbacks
  • maintenance
  • local ecosystem
  • immediate protection
  • significant maintenance
  • physical alteration
  • longer-term benefits
  • critical locations
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