The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams
illustrates
the issue of the land affected by flooding in a UK town and two probable solutions to tackle Change the verb form
illustrate
this
.
Overall
, since some areas have affected
by flooding, the first Add a missing verb
been affected
solution
is to relocate the fascilities
which has the drawback of cost. Correct your spelling
facilities
On the other hand
, the second solution
is constructing dams to prevent flooding which is considerably affordable compared to the former one.
The former solution
suggests the relocation of the industrial park, housing area, and commercial district far away from the estimated flooding area. By this
method, residential
area and the park will be relocated to the north of the River Awl; Correct article usage
the residential
however
, commercial
district will be placed to the south of the River Awl. The primary benefit of Add an article
the commercial
this
suggestion is the maintainment of the river environment. Nevertheless
, it costs a huge amount.
The latter solution
to
Add a missing verb
is to
built
dams to prevent flooding from the rivers. The connection between the rivers will be turned into channels and their surplus will be kept in reservoirs. Wrong verb form
build
Although
it is relatively cheaper than the first suggestion, the disruption of land to create reservoirs is the main drawback to solve
the flooding issue.Wrong verb form
solving
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