The diagrams show the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the issue of the land affected by flooding in a UK town and two probable solutions to tackle

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, since some areas have

affected

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by flooding, the first

solution

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is to relocate the

fascilities

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facilities

which has the drawback of cost.

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, the second

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is constructing dams to prevent flooding which is considerably affordable compared to the former one. The former

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suggests the relocation of the industrial park, housing area, and commercial district far away from the estimated flooding area. By

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method,

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area and the park will be relocated to the north of the River Awl;

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,

commercial

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the commercial

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district will be placed to the south of the River Awl. The primary benefit of

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suggestion is the maintainment of the river environment.

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, it costs a huge amount. The latter

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dams to prevent flooding from the rivers. The connection between the rivers will be turned into channels and their surplus will be kept in reservoirs.

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it is relatively cheaper than the first suggestion, the disruption of land to create reservoirs is the main drawback to

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the flooding issue.