Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

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It is being argued that
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there are more than 50 per cent female workers in many developed nations, most advanced-level
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in
companies
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are made up
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men
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.
Companies
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should be required to fixed percentage of these
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for
women
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. I strongly agree with
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statement because female can
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will be able to communicate well with consumers and they have more responsibility for
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than
men
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. Females might attract more consumers.
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, many
women
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are friendly, sexy and polite with their customers, so they can easily increase the company’s sales and profits.
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, it can be observed that Marine Health Company allocated most of the proportions of high-level
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to
women
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and the company's sales tripled. Another reason why
companies
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should replace
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in senior
positions
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with
women
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is because many females are responsible for
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.
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to say that females give reports on time and even they can work a night shift.
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, It helps to raise profits for many
companies
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.
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, many
companies
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in Uzbekistan account for high-level
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by
women
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because they are more liable than
men
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and it takes profits more thanks to
women
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. In conclusion, even though more than half per cent of workers are female in many developed nations, most top-level managers are male.
Companies
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should be required to allocate a certain percentage of high-level
positions
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to
women
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, and I completely agrees with that because female attract customers and they are responsible for their
jobs
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and work overtime.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender diversity
  • Affirmative action
  • Meritocracy
  • Quotas
  • Glass ceiling
  • Legal enforcement
  • Tokenism
  • Voluntary measures
  • Career progression
  • Representation
  • Workforce parity
  • Backlash
  • Historical imbalances
  • Corporate governance
  • Inclusive practices
  • Boardroom dynamics
  • Gender norms
  • Unconscious bias
  • Regulatory frameworks
  • Corporate ladder
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