Write a letter Your university is organizing the summer camp in the city where your best friend lives. Write a letter to your friend about 150-200 words about summer camp. Your email should do the following things. Ask your friend about night clubs in that city Request your friend to arrange a weekend party for your friends accompanying you.

Dear Nancy, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
to request some information about the nightclubs in your city
along with
the arrangements for a friend's party for my upcoming camp.
Firstly
, as you are aware I am studying MBA at "ABC University" and
this
April, my college is planning to organize a summer camp in the city named "Chicago".
Secondly
, most of the students are interested in going to the night parties but, that place is very new for all.
Moreover
, all are girls, so we need to have a few major considerations for choosing the best place like secure and close to the city centre.
For
this
reason, can you please help us by suggesting the best and well-rated club for our trip? Apart from that, as I will be moving to the UK next year, I thought of having a weekend party, particularly for all our friends in the
last
week of the same month.
Hence
, I need some more help to make arrangements for that, either in your home or in any other place which is near to your home. I am eagerly waiting to meet you soon and please revert me with your response. Best Regards, Suni
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task response
Make sure to clearly request information about nightclubs in the city.
coherence cohesion
Organize the ideas in each paragraph more effectively.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar
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