Write a letter Your university is organizing the summer camp in the city where your best friend lives. Write a letter to your friend about 150-200 words about summer camp. Your email should do the following things. Ask your friend about night clubs in that city Request your friend to arrange a weekend party for your friends accompanying you.

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Dear Nancy, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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to request some information about the nightclubs in your city

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the arrangements for a friend's party for my upcoming camp.

Firstly

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, as you are aware I am studying MBA at "ABC University" and

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April, my college is planning to organize a summer camp in the city named "Chicago".

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, most of the students are interested in going to the night parties but, that place is very new for all.

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, all are girls, so we need to have a few major considerations for choosing the best place like secure and close to the city centre.

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this

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reason, can you please help us by suggesting the best and well-rated club for our trip? Apart from that, as I will be moving to the UK next year, I thought of having a weekend party, particularly for all our friends in the

last

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week of the same month.

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, I need some more help to make arrangements for that, either in your home or in any other place which is near to your home. I am eagerly waiting to meet you soon and please revert me with your response. Best Regards, Suni

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task response

Make sure to clearly request information about nightclubs in the city.

coherence cohesion

Organize the ideas in each paragraph more effectively.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.

grammatical range

Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

208 words

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