Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better
Dear Sir,
I am writing to aware you about my birthday party which I have celebrated in your restaurant, and it was a great hit.
Firstly
i
want to Change the capitalization
I
thankyou
for reserving Correct your spelling
thank you
complete
floor for me on Correct article usage
a complete
such
a
short notice, and for a complementary birthday decoration really it meant a lot to me, Remove the article
apply
However
I have booked a buffet of 12 dishes which include four starter dishes six main coarse
and two desserts. I must say Correct your spelling
course
food
was tempting and Add an article
the food
presentation
of Correct article usage
the presentation
food
Correct article usage
the food
as
really up to the mark, me and my friends really enjoyed the food Correct your spelling
was
specially
the fried chicken Replace the word
especially
it's
taste was way better than Correct your spelling
its
chicken
in the other restaurants.
Correct article usage
the chicken
However
, there are few
things I want to mention which Correct article usage
a few
i
Change the capitalization
I
felt
to share with you to improve your service. Wrong verb form
feel
Firstly
your waiters should be in uniform or should have a uniform color
dress so it will be easy to identify the waiter in the rush, as waiters Change the spelling
colour
was
wearing Change the verb form
were
random
Add an article
a random
the random
color
dress so I find it difficult to call waiters for my service, Change the spelling
colour
Next,
is your drinks you do not have any variety of fruit juices, everyone do
not prefer soda or carbonated drinks to Change the verb form
does
i
suggest you Change the capitalization
I
to
add fresh fruit juices in your drinks menu, Remove the particle
apply
lastly
parking was an issue yesterday you have a very limited lanes
for parking it is requested to extend it so that costumers do not need to park their cars three metres away from the hotel.
I Correct the article-noun agreement
a very limited lane
very limited lanes
Hope
you will take my suggestions positively
yours faithfully,
John SmithFix capitalization
hope
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task response
Make sure to include all the required elements of the task in your letter.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas and paragraphs in a logical and coherent manner.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more varied and precise words.
grammatical range
Work on your grammatical accuracy and use a wider range of sentence structures.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite