The diagram below represents the “Comparison of how urban Chinese spent across major categories in 1995 versus the spending habits in 2011”. Summarise the information given in the diagrams. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart shows the differences between how the Chinese people who lived in the cities did their expenditure on important lists in their day-to-day life in the
year
1995 and Fix the agreement mistake
years
in
2011. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, we can see that the majority of the expenses is
on food and Change the verb form
are
the
less money is Correct article usage
apply
spend
on medicine and miscellaneous things.
Change the form of the verb
spent
To begin
with, in 1995 most of the expenses were spend
on refreshments and Change the verb form
were spent
a
least proportion of money Change the article
the
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
spend
on medicine and Wrong verb form
spent
others
things. Correct quantifier usage
other
On the other hand
, in 2011, 14% were less spend
on food and 4% more was Replace the word
spent
spend
on medicine.
Change the form of the verb
spent
To conclude
most of
Change preposition
apply
the
people like to spend more money on restaurants and healthy eating habits than any other daily habitsCorrect article usage
apply
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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