The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

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The illustration below compares the energy harnessed through coal, gas,

petro

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petrol

, nuclear and other sources in 1995 and 2005.

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, it can be inferred that more than two-thirds of the total energy was generated by gas, coal and

petro

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petrol

. In the beginning,

coal

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the coal

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sector was responsible for its highest contribution and other sources counted for the least,

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trend was followed till the end of the timeline. In 1995, about 29.80 per

cent

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of the total energy production was by using coal,

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the value rose minimally by a little more than a per

cent

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by the end. Gas

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accounted for

29.63

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a 29.63

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share in the start which eventually

increases

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increased

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slightly to 30.31 per

cent

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in 2005. Petro sector held

29.27

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a 29.27

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share of the total power generated in 1995,

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, the proportion declined considerably by approximately 10 per

cent

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by the end. Around 6.4 and 5 per

cent

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share belonged to Nuclear and other sources, respectively. In 2005, the numbers rose by somewhere near 4 per

cent

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for both of them.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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