The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The illustration below compares the energy harnessed through coal, gas,
petro
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petrol
, nuclear and other sources in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be inferred that more than two-thirds of the total energy was generated by gas, coal and
petro
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petrol
. In the beginning,
coal
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the coal
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sector was responsible for its highest contribution and other sources counted for the least,
this
trend was followed till the end of the timeline. In 1995, about 29.80 per
cent
of the total energy production was by using coal,
following
this
the value rose minimally by a little more than a per
cent
by the end. Gas
was
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accounted for
29.63
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a 29.63
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per
cent
share in the start which eventually
increases
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increased
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slightly to 30.31 per
cent
in 2005. Petro sector held
29.27
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a 29.27
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per
cent
share of the total power generated in 1995,
after
this
, the proportion declined considerably by approximately 10 per
cent
by the end. Around 6.4 and 5 per
cent
share belonged to Nuclear and other sources, respectively. In 2005, the numbers rose by somewhere near 4 per
cent
for both of them.
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