The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic illustrates the life
process
of the silkworm and the phases in the manufacture of
silk
material.
Overall
, the lifecycle is a natural
process
and contains four cyclical phases, beginning with the laying of eggs and ending with the birth of a new moth from a cocoon. The production of
silk
is,
in contrast
to the previous stage, a man-made linear
process
comprising
of
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6 main stages.
To begin
with, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes 10 days for the eggs to hatch into silkworm larvae that feed on mulberry leaves.
This
stage takes between 4 and 6 weeks before the worms construct a cocoon from
silk
thread, taking approximately one week. They stay there for around a fortnight,
subsequently
emerging as moths and the
process
can begin again. The first stage in the manufacture of
silk
is the selection of cocoons and these are
then
boiled. Once boiled, the
silk
thread is unwound to a length of between 300 and 900 meters.
Finally
, the
silk
can be twisted and weaved into cloth before being dyed.
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