The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the distribution of employment sectors in which graduates from Brighton
university
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entered in 2019.
Overall
, it is evident that there were four dominating industries preferred by students with service industries being the most popular choice. Precisely
one third
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of the university graduates were employed in service industries, which had the largest employment rate.
Furthermore
, there were three sectors, which employed each between 12 to 16 per cent, and these were politics and government, education and manufacturing industry. Mentioned above were the next biggest job-givers. When it comes to other fields of work, transportation and warehousing
as well as
science and technology employed between 7 to 8 per cent of students, followed by the civil service, which was popular among 5.6%
graduates
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. The least common ones,
according to
the pie chart, were sport and charity. The percentage for those were very low,
of
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0.1% and 0.3% respectively.
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