have recently joined a well-reputed company. In your office, the cafeteria is not cleaned properly. The cutlery available is usually unclean and most of the food on sale is stale Write an email to the human resources department in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: State what problem you face when you visit the cafeteria. Complain about the inability of the cafeteria staff to address the problem. Describe how you want the issue to be addressed.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express concern about
food
quality
in the office
cafeteria
. I have recently joined
this
company.
This
is the second world's largest IT company. around 4 lakh people are working in
this
organization. The office
cafeteria
is not cleaned properly. The cutlery available is usually unclean and most of the
food
on sale is stale. The table and chairs are not clean. yesterday I was order
food
it was take lots of time and
food
quality
was very bad. No one can do it. I raised a complaint again about
food
quality
and the salesman to the
food
counter manager. regarding the inability of the
cafeteria
staff and
food
. But I didn't receive any positive feedback even if that does not register my problem. that are taking the side of the employee. I would like to suggest changing the contractor in the
cafeteria
. contact all wander and check the
quality
of
food
and how healthy and good
food
quality
they are providing just check and
then
talk with all management and decide which wender is suitable for over company. I
hop
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hope
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you accept my advice for the sake of all employee's health and take advice from other employees. Regards, Aakansha Lunkad
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