The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchase by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019
The
chart
illustrates the proportion of canada's
business e-commerce Change the capitalization
Canada's
purchases
industry between 2015 and 2019. the businesses are manufacturing, construction, wholesale, retail, and information and communication. The unit of measurement used in the chart
is percentage.
The general trends on the chart
shows
a gradual proportion Change the verb form
show
increasement
for each industry.
Correct your spelling
increase
According to
the bar chart
, in 2018 shows both the manufacturing and construction industry remain
stable at 50%. The development slightly went up Wrong verb form
remained
at
approximately Change preposition
to
above
53% Change preposition
apply
at the end
of 2019. Differs
from wholesale and retail, which reached a peak at around 54% and increased steadily until the end of the period, Correct pronoun usage
This differs
whereas
the retail chart
remain
stable.
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remains
On the contrary
, the information and communication sector shows a rather stable growth of e-commerce purchases
. Since 2015, the sector has reached up 60
% of Change preposition
to 60
purchases
with a consecutive stable rise between 2016 and 2017 by 10%. Finally
, it reached it
peak in 2018, the highest trend in Change the pronoun
its
approximate
73% Change the word
approximately
e-commerce
Change preposition
of e-commerce
purchases
. The
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In the
last
period it drop
down back to 70% Wrong verb form
dropped
purchases
.Change preposition
of purchases
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