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Write a letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Manager, I am writing
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 to request
for
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time off for
couple
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 of weeks to complete my Associate Certification. First of all, My name is "Adam Smith" and currently working as
"Quality
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a quality
 check engineer"
in
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on
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the
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a
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 project called "ABC Product". I have scheduled for
cerification
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certification
verification
 called "Quality Check Associate" and the date of
exam
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the exam
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 will be 15th of November,
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this
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 reason, I need some time for preparation. Currently, the project
went
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 for live and
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, all other team members have some bandwidth to finish if any
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 issues
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. To compensate
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it
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, I am willing to take
additional
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responsibilitiesfor
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responsibilities for
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 our upcoming project and on top of it I will be ready to work for extra hours
post completion
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 of my exam.
This
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 qualification is not only essential for my career but
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 important for our organization.
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, it helps our company to allure
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 clients because of the
existance
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existence
 of highly qualified resources. Please consider
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as
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 priority and grant me permission. And I will be
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 for your reply. Yours sincerely, Adam Smith
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure a clear separation of ideas into individual paragraphs for improved coherence and clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
Provide a more formal and professional greeting and closing to match the context of the letter.
Task Achievement
Focus on maintaining a consistent level of formality and professionalism throughout the letter.
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