The line graph grap illustrates the changes in employment trends over a period of 70 years in the United States
The line graph shows
from
1970 to 2025 how employment trend Rephrase
how from
to change
, by three types of main Change the verb form
changed
job
: manufacturing, services and agriculture. The data is given by percentage. In Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
general
it shows that manufacturing and agriculture Add a comma
general,
has
a huge Correct subject-verb agreement
have
declided
, Correct your spelling
decline
declined
decided
while
services has
a great increase.
The first thing Change the verb form
have
that is
possible to observe that
services Add a missing verb
is that
has
a big peak, a little bit over Change the verb form
have
than
70% has been up since 1975. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the category manufacturing had a deep decrease after 1980, it was getting high with 40% however
the number descend
to less than 20% in 3 years approximately.
Wrong verb form
descended
However
, agriculture had a
biggest decrease of all. It Change the article
the
descend
Wrong verb form
descended
rapidament
over these years, it was Correct your spelling
rapidly
70
% Correct article usage
a 70
of
decrease in 70 years, Change preposition
apply
that
means almost 10% for each decade.Correct pronoun usage
which
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