The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the different
industries
chosen for graduate
students
chosen from Brighton University in 2019.
Overall
, graduates entering the service
industry
occupied a much higher percentage than any other field.
In contrast
, sports were much lower than any other field. In 2019, it was significant that more than one-third (33%) of graduate
students
selected
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for the service
industries
, which was a
hottes
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hottest
industry
for
students
choice
. The second and third most popular
industries
had similar data, people who chose the product
industry
and education occupied 16.3% and 14.7% respectively, and the politics and government departments were allocated 12.1% of graduates’
students
, which was the fourth place in the
students
choice
of
industry
.
In addition
, the remaining
industries
chosen by people's
choice
such
as transportation and warehousing, science and technology, civil service, charity, sports and others occupied a quarter (7.8%, 7.3%, 5.6%, 0.3%,0.1%, and 2.8% , respectively) of the whole
industry
pie chart.
On the other hand
, in
this
industry
sports and charity were not a popular
choice
with
students
.
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