The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the different
industries
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chosen for graduate
students
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chosen from Brighton University in 2019.
Overall
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, graduates entering the service
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occupied a much higher percentage than any other field.
In contrast
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, sports were much lower than any other field. In 2019, it was significant that more than one-third (33%) of graduate
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selected
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for the service
industries
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, which was a
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hottest
industry
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for
students
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choice
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. The second and third most popular
industries
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had similar data, people who chose the product
industry
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and education occupied 16.3% and 14.7% respectively, and the politics and government departments were allocated 12.1% of graduates’
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, which was the fourth place in the
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choice
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of
industry
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.
In addition
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, the remaining
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chosen by people's
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such
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as transportation and warehousing, science and technology, civil service, charity, sports and others occupied a quarter (7.8%, 7.3%, 5.6%, 0.3%,0.1%, and 2.8% , respectively) of the whole
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pie chart.
On the other hand
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, in
this
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industry
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sports and charity were not a popular
choice
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with
students
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words industries, students, industry, choice with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • employment sectors
  • graduates
  • significant
  • percentage
  • trend
  • compare
  • most chosen
  • least popular
  • distribution
  • highlight
  • graduate destinations
  • notable
  • cohesive understanding
  • employment trends
  • pie chart
  • bar chart
  • overview
  • chosen career paths
  • sector popularity
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