The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The provided line graph represents how the market of selling gold

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Dubai was in the whole year of 2002. The

overall

trend shows

differnet

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different

ups and downs. The sales started

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200

millions

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Janurary

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January

,

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increased slightly to 230 million.

Afterwards

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the rates rose sharply from

Feburary

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February

to March by around 130

millions

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, which is the biggest rising trend in the whole year,

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steady decline to around 110

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July at the lowest point. After both the sharpest increase and most significant decreases, the rate went back up to 200 million to the starting point,

then

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declines

declined

back to 110 million in September. It

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made a small jump to 180

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in October

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and kept stable for the rest of the three months at around 170

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to below 200

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