The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.
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The line graphs provide information about the
rate
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of New
Zealand
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's product importation from
Australia
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and
Japan
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between the years 1994 and 2004. Over the 10-year period, New
Zealand
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saw a rise and fall trend in terms of imported goods from
Japan
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and
Australia
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. It is very clear that a larger
rate
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of imports was seen in
Australia
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in the given years. During the early years, there was a rising trend in products purchased outside New
Zealand
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. In 1994, $4000
million
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was spent on Australian goods,
while
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Japan
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accounted for $3000
million
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in imports. The purchase of foreign commodities from
Australia
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continued to rise until 1996 at around $6500
million
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before a series of up-and-down trends, and by 1998, a dramatic fall from roughly $5500 to $3000
million
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in 1999 was seen. Import rates from
Japan
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, on the one hand steadily increased from 1994 to 1997 at $3000 to just above $6000 respectively. Another spike was seen in purchasing Japanese products at the beginning of 1999. From $6000
million
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in the year 2000, New
Zealand
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's
rate
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of import from
Japan
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declined rapidly. By 2004, the
rate
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of imports from
Australia
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was threefold higher than that of
Japan
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at $8000
million
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.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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