The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
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The given pie charts illustrate the shifts in the ratio of
energy
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produced by France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, there are five sources of
energy
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and in both years, the production was dominated by coal, gas, and petrol.
To begin
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with, in 1995, the biggest contributors were coal, gas, and petrol which showed approximately 29%.
Subsequently
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, the three of them made up almost 90% of the
energy
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in the whole country. Meanwhile, nuclear and other sources of power covered up the remaining 10% by giving 6.40% and 4.90% respectively. Ten years later, in 2025, the same three sectors still supplied the most
energy
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in France.
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, there were changes in the proportion. Coal and gas both went up to around 30%,
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petrol fell dramatically to just under 20%.
On the other hand
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, both nuclear and other sources of power increased significantly by about 4%.
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