The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female
students
enrolling in 6 various subjects
at a UK university in 2011.
It is clear that
there were more students
who took linguistics, English language and literature, and communication and media study. In particular
, female
predominated in most art-related Fix the agreement mistake
females
subjects
.
There were 250 female and 230 male students
who took English language and literature in their university study which was the most popular subject
among all choices. Communication and media study was another popular subject
and there were also
more than 200 male and female students
who chose this
discipline. Though linguistics was another popular subject
with more than a total of 400 students
, the gender imbalance was more obvious than the other two popular subjects
.
Despite art-related subjects
were
more popular among female Wrong verb form
being
students
, there were 20 more male than female students
in the subject
of art and design. Among all subjects
, there were 100 more female than male students
in philosophy, marking the biggest difference in terms of gender distribution. History and archaeology was a
relatively less popular choice, with 90 and 120 male and female Correct article usage
apply
students
respectively.Submitted by jothyliu on
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