The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female

students

enrolling in 6 various

subjects

at a UK university in 2011.

It is clear that

there were more

students

who took linguistics, English language and literature, and communication and media study.

In particular

female

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females

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predominated in most art-related

subjects

. There were 250 female and 230 male

students

who took English language and literature in their university study which was the most popular

subject

among all choices. Communication and media study was another popular

subject

and there were

also

more than 200 male and female

students

who chose

this

discipline. Though linguistics was another popular

subject

with more than a total of 400

students

, the gender imbalance was more obvious than the other two popular

subjects

. Despite art-related

subjects

were

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being

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more popular among female

students

, there were 20 more male than female

students

in the

subject

of art and design. Among all

subjects

, there were 100 more female than male

students

in philosophy, marking the biggest difference in terms of gender distribution. History and archaeology was

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apply

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relatively less popular choice, with 90 and 120 male and female

students

respectively.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

190 words

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