The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female
students
enrolling in 6 various
subjects
at a UK university in 2011.
It is clear that
there were more
students
who took linguistics, English language and literature, and communication and media study.
In particular
,
female
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predominated in most art-related
subjects
. There were 250 female and 230 male
students
who took English language and literature in their university study which was the most popular
subject
among all choices. Communication and media study was another popular
subject
and there were
also
more than 200 male and female
students
who chose
this
discipline. Though linguistics was another popular
subject
with more than a total of 400
students
, the gender imbalance was more obvious than the other two popular
subjects
. Despite art-related
subjects
were
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more popular among female
students
, there were 20 more male than female
students
in the
subject
of art and design. Among all
subjects
, there were 100 more female than male
students
in philosophy, marking the biggest difference in terms of gender distribution. History and archaeology was
a
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relatively less popular choice, with 90 and 120 male and female
students
respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, subjects, subject with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • art-related subjects
  • gender distribution
  • predominate
  • significant
  • gender imbalances
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • balanced distribution
  • data
  • figures
  • trends
  • popular
  • least popular
  • subject choices
  • analyze
  • overview
  • summarize
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