The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

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illustrate the

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sources in a given nation in the years 1995 and 2005.

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,it could be seen that the highest

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sources:

coal

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and

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of other sources and nuclear input increased, meanwhile petro input in

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production continued to decrease in 2005.

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the chart,coal and

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has risen only by 1% from 1995 to 2005.

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% between 1995 and 2005.The contribution of coal increased from 29.80% to 30.93% in 2005.

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in 1995 but it

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considerably to just one-fifth of total production by 2005.

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that,nuclear

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saw a significant rise,doubling from 6.40% to 10%.

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with figures rising from nearly 5% to over 9% in 2005.