The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
The two pie
chart
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illustrate the
propotion
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proportion
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various
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of various
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energy
sources in a given nation in the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
,it could be seen that the highest
energy
sources:
coal
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and
gas
.The
percent of
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of other sources and nuclear input increased, meanwhile petro input in
energy
production continued to decrease in 2005.
According to
the chart,coal and
gas
has risen only by 1% from 1995 to 2005.
Energy
production by
gas
increased
1
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% between 1995 and 2005.The contribution of coal increased from 29.80% to 30.93% in 2005.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
petro
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petrol
was used
equivalent
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to
gas
in 1995 but it
had fallen
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considerably to just one-fifth of total production by 2005.
Beside
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that,nuclear
energy
saw a significant rise,doubling from 6.40% to 10%.
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of
energy
with figures rising from nearly 5% to over 9% in 2005.
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