The line graph below shows the changes in the rate of sales of Gold in Dubai in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The

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illustration demonstrates Dubai's

gold

sales

throughout the

year

2002. It shows the fluctuation in

gold

purchased during different periods till

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year end

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2002

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. In a nutshell, the rate of

sales

reaches a peak in March and drops to the lowest point in July. There are four major tendencies which can be observed through the given line graph: the rising trend in the first 3

months

, the downfall of

gold

sales

in the following 4

months

, the

fluctuated

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stage between July and October,

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stable period for the

last

2

months

. In the beginning, the amount of

gold

purchased started

with

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200

million

then

it had a slight increase to around 225

million

Dirhams in February. After the initial period, the level of selling

gold

in Dubai rose dramatically to 350

million

which was the highest spot throughout the

year

. The next stage from March to July recorded a continuous downward trend in

gold

trading until

sales

of

gold

touched its bottom at approximately 110

million

. During the next 3

months

, August’s

gold

sales

went abruptly higher, over 200

million

but it

then

dropped suddenly to 115

million

in September. For the rest of the

year

, since October,

gold

trading remained constantly averaging over 185

million

Dirhams.