The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph represents the
percentage
of overseas travellers and the 4 entertainments, which they Use synonyms
more
likely to visit in Brighton between 1980 and 2010.
Basically, by far the most popular places in terms of tourist Add a missing verb
were more
percentage
have completely opposite patterns compared to each other, whilst the rest Use synonyms
ones
witnessed a similar tendency over the first years.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Pavilion
as the place with the heaviest Correct article usage
The pavilion
percentage
showed a fast steady rise up to 1995, reaching its peak at just below Use synonyms
the
half, Correct article usage
apply
while
the festival’s fame had no changes and was levelled Linking Words
of
through the period. There was Replace the word
off
also
a sudden collapse in 2010 Linking Words
on
almost one-third of the initial Change preposition
of
percentage
, after which the pavilion’s popularity Use synonyms
was
slightly Verb problem
apply
decreasing
up to the end of the period, constituting Wrong verb form
decreased
namely
30% and Rephrase
apply
anyway
exceeding the remaining ones.
By starting with a difference of nearly 10%, the art gallery and Pier witnessed the same attendance in 2005, standing at approximately 15%. The pier, Rephrase
apply
initially
by far the least Linking Words
attending
place doubled its figures from 10% and reached the top three attractions. Wrong verb form
attended
Conversely
, the Linking Words
overall
slump was shown by Linking Words
art
gallery, despite the jump in 1995.Add an article
an art
the art
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