You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph represents the

percentage

of overseas travellers and the 4 entertainments, which they

more

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were more

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likely to visit in Brighton between 1980 and 2010. Basically, by far the most popular places in terms of tourist

percentage

have completely opposite patterns compared to each other, whilst the rest

ones

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witnessed a similar tendency over the first years.

Pavilion

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The pavilion

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as the place with the heaviest

percentage

showed a fast steady rise up to 1995, reaching its peak at just below

the

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half,

while

the festival’s fame had no changes and was levelled

of

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off

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through the period. There was

also

a sudden collapse in 2010

on

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almost one-third of the initial

percentage

, after which the pavilion’s popularity

was

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slightly

decreasing

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decreased

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up to the end of the period, constituting

namely

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30% and

anyway

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apply

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exceeding the remaining ones. By starting with a difference of nearly 10%, the art gallery and Pier witnessed the same attendance in 2005, standing at approximately 15%. The pier,

initially

by far the least

attending

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attended

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place doubled its figures from 10% and reached the top three attractions.

Conversely

, the

overall

slump was shown by

art

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an art

the art

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gallery, despite the jump in 1995.