The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the
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allocation for different purposes in six different continents and sub-continents in the world. As observed from the charts, there are two variations in the majority of
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usage. Most of the developing regions preferred the resource for agricultural purposes,
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the developed areas used the
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for industrial aspects. Central Asia, Africa, and Southeast Asia have the highest percentage of
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consumption for agriculture sectors, maintaining higher than 80
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per cent
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the other sectors consumed less than 20% in total. Similar to the mentioned regions, the South American people flow 70% of the
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supply for food production, but they have the largest proportion of domestic
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consumption by almost 20%. The other continents are more developed like North America and Europe which consume around half of the supplies for industrial and manufacturing sectors
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maintaining the demand for plantation and household which is
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around 50% of total consumption.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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