The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart demonstrates fractions of businesses' e-commerce
purchase
based on industry in Canada from 2015 to 2019.
In essence, the construction companies' e-commerce spending rose sharply over the years, followed by Fix the agreement mistake
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wholesale's
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retails
, the percentage shot up for a year before slightly Replace the word
retailers
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purchase
which went up and down drastically. The rates of online commercial payment Fix the agreement mistake
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percent
, and the numbers rose unsteadily, having 60 Change the spelling
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in the end. The construction business, in 2015 with the least Change the spelling
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2019. Meanwhile for wholesales, having Change preposition
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but waned in later years. And for information and communication-related businesses, by 2015 it was already the highest out of all by 60 Remove the comma
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