The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various catego ries during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each c ategory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an d make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar charts provide data on the amount of exporting incomes in a variety of areas in a specific nation in both 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, in 2016 the level of income from exporting in petroleum, engineering, and textile were
higher compared to 2015. Change the verb form
was
In addition
, the loads of money
from selling agricultural products in both years was
equal, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
the profit of
germs and Change preposition
from
jewelries
in 2016 was lower than Change the wording
jewelry
pieces of jewelry
2015
despite other categories.
Change preposition
in 2015
According to
the chart, the money
comes
from exporting petroleum goods and engineered products experienced an increasing trend from 2015 to 2016 and reached from 61 Correct pronoun usage
that comes
billion
dollars
to 63 billion
dollars
and from 57 billion
dollars
to the same level as petroleum income in 2016 respectively. Also
, the earned money
in textile
rose from below 30 Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
billion
dollars
to more than that.
It is obvious that despite all growing
trends, the profits from sending gold and Correct article usage
the growing
jewelries
declined from 43 Change the wording
jewelry
pieces of jewelry
billion
dollars
in 2015 to about 2 billion
dollars
lower. The money
derived from selling agricultural products almost remained unchanged in both years and was about 31billion
Correct your spelling
31 billion
dollars
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