IELTS writing sample: The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: - A brief introduction of yourself - Your experience and relevant skills - Why you want the job
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter for the application of the job during the summer time
. Correct your spelling
summertime
Firstly
,I would like to introduce to
myself. I am Rahul Kumar studying M.Sc. in Computer Science from the Change preposition
apply
department
of Capitalize word
Department
science
.
I Capitalize word
Science
am holding
enough experience working in Verb problem
have
library
as a book shelf filler. Add an article
a library
the library
During
pursuing Change preposition
While
of
my Change preposition
apply
Bachelor
degree, I Change noun form
Bachelor's
was working
in Wrong verb form
worked
library
as Add an article
a library
the library
library
assistant. I Add an article
a library
am holding
2 years of experience Wrong verb form
have
of
working in Change preposition
apply
library
. The job duties Add an article
the library
a library
includes
sorting Change the verb form
include
of
Change preposition
apply
books
, rearrangement of shelfs
, Correct your spelling
shelves
shelf
shelfing
Correct your spelling
shelving
books
/magazines which are left out on the study table, adding new books
to database
, Correct article usage
the database
providing
assistance for Correct word choice
and providing
student
in finding Add an article
a student
books
. My library
head was very much impressed with my work
. Looking at my zeal and commitment towards work
I was offered to work
extra hours between 5pm to 7 pm in to evening.
I am looking forward to work
as a Wrong verb form
working
library
assistant as I am very much interested in living between book
and love serving people. Fix the agreement mistake
books
Moreover
, it will help me financially as well to pay my education fees.Hope to see your reply soon.Yours SincerelyRahul KumarSubmitted by kishna.238 on
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logical structure
Ensure that your letter has a clear and logical structure. Consider organizing your content into paragraphs with clear topic sentences to better convey your message.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate, but ensure to use consistent formal language throughout the letter for a uniform tone.
single idea per paragraph
Try to focus on one idea per paragraph. Your experience and skills should be one paragraph, and your reasons for wanting the job, another.
complete response
Make sure to address all parts of the prompt fully. Discuss your skills and experience in more detail and explain why they are relevant to the job at the library.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a suitable formal tone throughout the entire letter. Avoid casual language and ensure correct salutations and sign-offs are used. Additionally, check for grammatical accuracy and use complete sentences.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,